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5/8/2009 12:31:56 PM #
This is a well written and gripping tale. I'd like to read more from this writer. Thank you for sending it in.
Anonymous
5/11/2009 2:44:49 PM #
What's a "sett"? I know the sentence flows together well, sett into tattered, but I still don't know what the word means and don't have time now to look it up. You have to be kind, and simple, to your readers. Or start writing poetry... Now, this "Journal of One About to Die" is never going to be published, at least not with the title you're using. I hate to use a crutch, but this subject matter is older than time, and has been done better. You must pick your material more selectively. I like to write about what pisses me off --- today, tommorow, looking back. All through life. If you know what to look for, and how to describe it, the material is all right there. Good luck, and keep writing. It gets better and better the more you do it.
Barrett Allen Stites
7/18/2009 3:17:16 PM #
Nice way of summing it up.. cheers
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